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Ultimatum Edit Week 1: Day Two

November 8th, 2008 by | Tags: , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

Yesterday was literally the calm before the storm, as we got to briefly check in with the Fantastic Four, the Ultimates, as well as Spider-Man and his amazing friends. You know, that’s pretty rare for a Loeb comic. We got FIVE single pages without the sudden, blatant two-page spread. It’s a start.

Now let’s push forward.

Huh. I didn’t intend this, but if you look at those thumbnails, it looks like Thor has suddenly transformed into a big, bald guy.

Thanks to ManiacClown. The second page was more or less his baby. Now it’s stuck in my head.

Tomorrow it’s time for the tragedy to begin. I mean tragedy in terms of the story. I mean… You know what I mean!

Day Three!
Day Four!
Day Five!
Day Six!
Day Seven!

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7 comments to “Ultimatum Edit Week 1: Day Two”

  1. Splash page. Just… damn.

    Also I hope the edit won’t cut into your writing time for We Care A Lot.


  2. Aaaaaah. 4th letter parody. Eases the pain.

    Also – “The Mutant Age has now begun!” Holy shit, yes. I love that. And is it really, “Here is the day”? Because I always heard it as “[inaudible] the day”.


  3. Hahaha, oh I’m always up for a good/bad pun. Splash page indeed.


  4. @HitTheTargets: We Care a Lot will continue right after Day Seven.

    @Bass: I had to listen to it a few times to get a good grasp on what it was. The internet claims that it’s “Saves the day!”, but that doesn’t sound like it at all.


  5. Great day 2! :D

    The part about the sad piano music really made me laugh! I love that song, and used to watch the TV Hulk series as a kid.

    The joke about breathing underwater…priceless.

    Oh, and the Costner joke, perfect. :)


  6. AC/DC – I am filled with national pride and shame


  7. I’ve heard that it’s supposed to be a flood, but it just looks like a lot of rain to me.

    In the actual comic Dazzler says: “Oh yeah, I’ve pierced myself all over my body because I’m having a love fest with myself.” How can you not make fun of that!? That’s funnier and weirder (as worst dialogue ever) than the dialogue you wrote in!